Week 5A- Sept. 23

Today in class, we went over to the next room again to critique each others' rough layout sketches and give advice on particular images to use in our publications. I received some good feedback from the two people in my group, Emily and Levi. They suggested to use my second spread as a map of a metropolitan area such as New York City, and highlight the areas in which the manufacturing facility and food truck drop off points are. They also suggested to use a more sporadic, crazier type of body copy within the map or along the side as a tab. Since the beginning is about the food truck making deliveries, and the end is about all of the food getting contaminated, I was told to perhaps put the beginning part in the first spread, the transition to the worse situation in the middle map spread, and the terrible ending in the third spread. Emily even said to possibly have a caravan of food trucks that lead into the title on the impact spread.
Homework: Finish 3 detail color double page spreads for next class
- Read pages: 58-59- Publication Components, & 82-85- Sequencing and Pacing: Creating flow among Pages


Below are the suggestions that were left on the white board.