Week 3B- Sept.11

Today in class, we set out our second black and white layouts and went around the room, commenting on a piece of paper our constructive criticism and aspects that we liked. I was given multiple comments on what to change and things that people liked, and multiple suggestions on how to make my spreads better. I was told to make a more uniform layout instead of different ideas on each spread. My goal was to not make it random as my glyph is personified as a fancy, rich British man with a big heart, so I felt that the layout needed to be more simple and uniform. I hope this will be achieved upon presenting my final spread in color. Our homework is to finish the Glyph Exercise for next class and print in color, cropped flushed, no mounting needed. We must also bring in all ideation and previous printouts and read pages 19-25 and 50-53 in our Publication Design Workbook.